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Model 2 final

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final..done in mars lit,bristol vellum a2
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You have done a first class job on this one,but for me i would like to see some stronger/darker shadows. I find it can look a little flat if the darks are missing.But hey its a very nice piece i think its your best.
Just have another quick look at your ref photo and find the darks and put them in,it will make your drawing more 3d and make it jump off the page if you know what i mean.
You do have a good eye for tones,it shows in your work so hey it might just be me that likes to see darker shadows.